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K**R
Lincoln book 2
Excellent book absolutely awesome so much suspense and action packed pages. I recommend to everyone to read these two books you get sucked in to a mind blowing story. Unmissable is my opinion loved them all. Thanks
A**R
It was ok, nothing I will read again to be honest
It was ok, I’m guessing there was some story behind on the first book about Lincoln and Allie because I felt it went from 0 to 100 in the first pages of the book, there was no development in their characters, and to many things going around at the same time that it felt the book was all over the place.
A**R
I love Lincoln and Allie
Another great book, by author Susie McIver. There is always romance and action and adventure in this authors books. I can't wait to see what happens with Ethan and Sara. Love these books!
D**E
Jumble of story ideas
I would have liked it better if one or two of the half dozen or so plots in this book were fleshed out into complete stories with depth. The book starts with human trafficking with zero information about the antagonists and a pair of protagonists almost too stupid to be a homicide detective and a Seal. Then we jump to a couple chapters about a plot to blow up the library of congress, an implausible tale of a kid dealing with corporate espionage and young siblings, then back to kidnapping again, all with zero suspense.
J**L
good but simple
This book feels like it is an outline as opposed to a real book. It could have had more detail, action and character development as well as involvement.I also felt it was written for a less educated audience.Had the author put more time and effort into writing this book I would have enjoyed it a lot better
K**R
Show, don't tell
If we were sitting around a campfire, telling stories, I would have loved this one. But reading it? Not so much. I expect the author to know certain things, like traitor, not trader. And that West Point is the equivalent of the Naval Academy, not a precursor to it. Also, Navy SEALs are smart, well trained team players who know how to plan and network, not rush in unprepared over and over again. In addition, the dialogue was stilted and hurt the overall story more than it helped.I could tell Ms McIver knows how to plot out a book, but she completely left out the research part. I am afraid she could also use an editor that knows when to use which tense of a verb.All in all, I'm glad this one was a freebie.
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